Five Dollars

my biggest area I improved on is figuring out what to write for some stuff. I am most proud of my effort in figuring out what to write for what could happen to you if you did something naughty. I would like to improve on stop getting distracted.

Descriptive Writing

My biggest area I improved on is making the sentences a little bit better. I am most proud of my effort in finding out good descriptive words. I would like to improve on making the sentences a little bit more descriptive.